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um...i wrote a poem...

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um...i wrote a poem...

Postby amber_92_2010 on Tue May 27, 2008 5:00 pm

i wrote this poem for an english project and it turned out pretty good. thought ud like to hear it so here it is......

If I could dream…

If I could dream at all it would be about you,
Of how you make me smile all day through.

I would dream of you becoming like me.
Wondering how your new life would be.

Thinking why you would chose this life.
Waiting for the day for you to be my wife.

I know all about you inside and out.
You are the only thing I think about.

You are my biggest obsession.
You are my most prized possession.

I only want whatever is best,
Better for you over all the rest.

If I could dream at all, I would see us side by side.
Me trying to figure out what’s going through your mind.

You are my life my soul and my heart,
I cannot stand when we are apart.

I know we will always be together,
I am yours now until forever.
Amber is my given name
Alice is my chosen name

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Postby katiewonderland on Tue May 27, 2008 6:56 pm

SWEET!!! That was really, really good! My sister is reading it and I think she is about to have a cow!
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Postby amber_92_2010 on Wed May 28, 2008 6:29 pm

thx im glad u liked it.


and i like ur pic. im short too. :D dont mess with the short ppl
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Postby BELLA4LIFE on Sun Jun 01, 2008 6:26 pm

amazing
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Postby Marthie94 on Tue Jun 03, 2008 11:01 am

WOW! That is freakin awsome!

Very touching

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Postby EC<3 on Thu Jun 05, 2008 7:20 pm

i love it...its really nice....=)
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Postby Bella_Black-Cullen on Tue Jun 17, 2008 10:05 pm

I just love reading and writing poems on Twilight. I loved your poem :]
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Postby veggie_head_girl on Tue Jun 24, 2008 2:52 am

Bravo! Loved it! :D
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Postby twilightjessy on Tue Jun 24, 2008 7:46 am

*claps* It's amazing I love it.
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Postby twilightaddict22710 on Tue Jun 24, 2008 12:54 pm

Wow.

I think the last time I ever liked a poem at all was about three or four years ago.

Thanks for getting me out of my "I hate poems" slump.
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Postby Mystique on Thu Jul 03, 2008 6:17 pm

This is great :D
Well...written!
I think you're talented in twilight poem writing! :D
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Postby michelealicecullen13 on Sat Aug 09, 2008 12:57 pm

Thats really good! So Twilight! I loved it :D
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Postby brunette_albino on Sat Aug 09, 2008 2:04 pm

Marthie94 wrote:WOW! That is freakin awsome!

Very touching

:D


I feel the same way! :P
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Postby ILoveTheLion on Tue Aug 19, 2008 12:11 am

OME!! I luv it!! great job :D
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Postby OfficiallyDazzled101 on Tue Aug 19, 2008 3:42 pm

That is amazing! : ) you're really good at writing!
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