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The Host POEM: I Let You Go

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The Host POEM: I Let You Go

Postby EC<3 on Tue Jun 10, 2008 9:00 pm

*06/09/08

From: Jared
To: Melanie

I Let You Go
I lost you.
I let you go.
I promised you I'd protect you... until the end of the world.
Now you're never coming home.
All because I let you go.
I've lost you forever.
Just like I've lost everything else.
Just like all of humanity has been lost.
I let you go.
When I swore to you that I never would.
I should have stopped you... it should have been me in your place.
Now I'll never see your face again.
Hear your voice... kiss your lips... never.
All because I lost you.
All because I let you go.


*this poem is based on The Host by Stephenie Meyer.
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Postby Jenicky on Tue Jun 10, 2008 9:40 pm

That's a really good poem. You really capture Jared's emotions :D
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Postby piknik on Wed Jun 11, 2008 5:49 am

gnaww -- that's soo adorable
i love your poem !
and i agree w/ Jenicky
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Postby iamcullen on Thu Jun 12, 2008 1:54 am

Awwww..
I love the poem.

I agree with the two girls.
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Postby capox on Thu Jun 12, 2008 3:16 am

this poem is perfect for jared and melanie!!!
omg you're amazing.
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Postby CullenLuvr on Thu Jun 12, 2008 8:01 pm

That's amazing!! :D
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Postby rachelb on Thu Jun 12, 2008 8:35 pm

Wow that's really good! So sweet, and perfect for Jared! (:
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Postby Vampy<3_44eVer178 on Sun Jun 15, 2008 9:02 pm

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Postby Dreaming Solitude on Fri Jun 20, 2008 7:17 pm

Oh I like it alot. Nice poem.
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Postby essa01 on Tue Jul 15, 2008 11:22 am

Beautiful!
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Postby retrobee on Tue Aug 12, 2008 5:46 pm

I love it! It's so insightful and beautiful!
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Re: The Host POEM: I Let You Go

Postby vampirewannabe on Sat Sep 06, 2008 11:01 pm

wow, this really is amazing. it's exactly as I imagined Jared to feel.

perfect!

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